Do you know what is fast food?
What did you like and often consuming fast food? almost everyone knows , likes , and often eating fast food . Almost all fast food is always cooked and experience the process for so long that they lose life enzymes needed by the body to feel the satisfaction that fact.
In other words , the more fast food consumed there are fewer raw food. Though fresh and raw foods give the body the ingredients that are not found in cooked and processed foods ( all animal products are food products made with a process that is very very long and inefficient and polluting the environment ) . Fast food and frozen food products that contain an addictive substance . At least no preservatives , coloring , flavoring up . To avoid the accumulation of these substances in the body should avoid the consumption of these foods in large quantities . Or if possible better to consume foods from natural ingredients .
Therefore, the public must be good food choices not only of appearance but also the content of anything contained in food. Usually the content that can be found in food packaging.
Based the reason mentioned, we should not consume fast food regularly. To how the fast food pattern in the following way. Here is how to do it. First , Do not overuse the fast food , a maximum of 1 month. Second, If you want to eat fast food , you should first know if the nutritional content on the site need to find out fast food manufacturers . Third , Do not just eat a burger , fries , or fried chicken but also eat a salad or vegetable soup packets are supplied in a fast food restaurant . Fourth , Avoid ordering drinks with high sugar content such as carbonated drinks , cola or rootbeer Replace your drinks with mineral water or fruit juice and balance with frest fruits .
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BalasHapus- "Do you know what it is fast food ?" Apakah kalimat itu sudah tepat? Sepertinya kalimat tersebut akan lebih efektif bila 'it' nya dibuang.
- Ingatlah bahwa sebuah hortatory exposition text itu terdiri atas thesis, arguments, dan recommendation. Jangan meletakkan argumen satu paragraf dengan thesis.
- Bila menggunakan Google Translate, jangan digunakan untuk mentranslate satu paragraf penuh karena hasilnya akan sangat terlihat (berantakan). Gunakan Google Translate hanya untuk menerjemahkan frasa.
I don't understand why you had to explain about alcoholic beverages when you supposed totalk about fast food. And you can search up on the dictionary if there's a word you don't actually know. I suggest you to follow up this outline I've posted to your friend:
BalasHapusTitle:You can decide it later once you finish your text. Make sure it represents the whole idea of your text.
Opening/general statement: Go from general to specific(your matter).
Thesis/opinion: What's your idea? Example: Fast food kills, or is bad, or whatever, make it to be your main idea).
Argument 1: You can go from the most important one to the least or the reverse. Don't forget to collect some facts. Example: It threaten your health Fact 1, Fact 2, Fact 3...Don't just say "because..." and explain your other opinion. It has to be a fact! Make it three if possible.
Argument 2: Example: It is addictive. Fact 1, Fact 2, Fact 3...
Argument 3: Whatever.. Fact 1, Fact 2, Fact 3...
Conclusion/Recommendation/Suggestion: Here you recommmend/suggest how should people do or stuffs due to the matter you've already talked about.
ini sangat bermanfaat bagi kita untuk mengetahui bahaya dari makanan cepat saji. berita yang anda tulis lumayan bagus
BalasHapusOk thank
BalasHapusThank for all comment
BalasHapusMari kita bedah....
BalasHapusDo you know what is fast food?
What did you like and often consuming fast food? almost everyone knows , likes , and often eating fast food . Almost all fast food is always cooked and experience the process for so long that they lose life enzymes needed by the body to feel the satisfaction that fact.[Pada paragraf ini kamu terlalu banyak menggunakan kalimat tanya. Lebih baik langsung jelaskan apa itu fast food dan apa saja jenisnya]
In other words , the more fast food consumed there are fewer raw food. Though fresh and raw foods give the body the ingredients that are not found in cooked and processed foods ( all animal products are food products made with a process that is very very long and inefficient and polluting the environment ) . Fast food and frozen food products that contain an addictive substance . At least no preservatives , coloring , flavoring up . To avoid the accumulation of these substances in the body should avoid the consumption of these foods in large quantities . Or if possible better to consume foods from natural ingredients .
Therefore, the public must be good food choices not only of appearance but also the content of anything contained in food. Usually the content that can be found in food packaging.
[Apakah ini adalah argumenmua? harusnya kamu menjelaskan apa saja yang terkandung di dalam fast food dan apa dampak buruknya bagi tubuh. Jadi, pada bagian rekomendasi kamu bisa mengajak pembaca untuk mengurangi konsumsi fast food berdasarkan argumen yang telah kamu jelaskan]
Perbaiki lagi tulisanmu dan coba searching di google mengenai bagaimana bentuk dari hortatory exposition. Good luck!
Hey manpraya 16 :) cek yuk=>
BalasHapusWhat did you like and often consuming fast food? (Kalimatnya gimana nih? Do you like fast food? simpel gitu aja bisa ko)almost everyone knows , likes , and often eating(eat) fast food . Almost all fast food is always cooked and experience the process for so long that they lose life enzymes needed by the body to feel the satisfaction that fact.(Saya gak ngerti maksudnya nih manpraya 16, kalimatnya mungkin gini ya=> Fast food is lack of nutritients which are needed by the body through the cooking process.
In other words , the more fast food consumed there are fewer raw food(err..ini jadinya maksud dari teksnya apa? kalo fast food itu diamasak makanya gak baik? bukan itu kan??ayo diperhatikan lagi dong). Though fresh and raw foods give the body the ingredients that are not found in cooked and processed foods ( all animal products are food products made with a process that is very very long and inefficient and polluting the environment ) . Fast food and frozen food products that contain an addictive substance . At least no preservatives , coloring , flavoring up . To avoid the accumulation of these substances in the body should avoid the consumption of these foods in large quantities . Or if possible better to consume foods from natural ingredients .
Therefore, the public must be good food choices not only of appearance but also the content of anything contained in food. Usually the content that can be found in food packaging.
Based the reason mentioned, we should not consume fast food regularly. To how the fast food pattern in the following way. Here is how to do it. First , Do not overuse the fast food , a maximum of 1 month. Second, If you want to eat fast food , you should first know if the nutritional content on the site need to find out fast food manufacturers . Third , Do not just eat a burger , fries , or fried chicken but also eat a salad or vegetable soup packets are supplied in a fast food restaurant . Fourth , Avoid ordering drinks with high sugar content such as carbonated drinks , cola or rootbeer Replace your drinks with mineral water or fruit juice and balance with frest fruits .
Errr gini aja ya... kan ini topiknya fast food.. terus kamu bilang kan fast food itu gak baik, jadi bikin 3 argument alasan kenapa menurut kamu fast food gak baik..di setiap alasannya kamu masukin juga fakta dari badan kesehatan kek, penelitian kek, katakata menteri kesehatan kek, pokoknya fakta. di akhir pas bagian recommendation kamu bisa bilang=> so, we should stop eating fast food. terus kasih sarannya kalo gak makan fast food makan apa? gitu. semangat ya!